Subject: That's actually the one I haven't read yet...
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Posted on: 2013-11-11 23:10:00 UTC
...but I've been PMing with her, and apparently that's the one that's not like the others. For one thing, there's nothing bad happening to the Doctor's timeline, and, as far as I know, nothing giving him a headache. And no twists. *shrug*
-Aila
Well, technically, an author rec. This author is Lynse (http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2045639/Lynse), and she writes wonderful fic. Her Doctor Who crossovers are, in my opinion, as good as The Man With No Name, and I'm really very fond of The Man With No Name. The Tenth Doctor is so very in-character it's scary, they're all brilliantly plotted out, the technobabble is incredible, and she has this habit of misleading both the Doctor and the audience. Never assume is a rule when reading her work.
Of course, those aren't only things she's written. Go take a peek.
-Aila
...And I liked it. Alot.
Since I'm in a critique mood right now, I will give some criticism. I felt like the story repeated itself quite a bit, though that was tied into the message of the fic. Drill it into their heads and such. I also felt that the kids were slightly ooc, mostly in how they spoke, but it was not too bad.
That aside though, it was very well made, and I do not regret reading it. The Doctor's voice was perfect, and the way the fic tied the begining and end together was brilliant. The author has skill, I will say that much.
...but I've been PMing with her, and apparently that's the one that's not like the others. For one thing, there's nothing bad happening to the Doctor's timeline, and, as far as I know, nothing giving him a headache. And no twists. *shrug*
-Aila
On the positive side, I think this is our first Mini-Bus! If that's positive.