Subject: More or less, yeah, this is it.
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Posted on: 2013-11-10 23:27:00 UTC
This fic is what inspired me to do this whole thing. It is one of the most beloved and hated fics in the entire brony fandom.
On one side, many readers see it as one of the most well crafted stories they have seen from fanfiction. The progression of Nyx's character arch (Nyx is filly Nightmare Moon) is deep, and one of the most detailed progressions not only in Fanfiction, but in literature. Also, Nyx is just too adorable in her widdle gwasses, and vest, and just LOOK AT HER:
DAWW!
DOUBLE DAWW!!
On the other side, many readers see Nyx as a Mary Sue. The fact that she is Nightmare Moon as a filly, that she has Twilight be her caretaker, that the only ponies who dislike her (as a filly) are Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon, and that she drives just about everypony OOC by her mere presence are just some of the usual accusations. Add to it that several characters carry the idiot ball for most of the fic, several SPaG errors, and a few plotholes, and you get one awful fic.
So, should you read it? I would say yes, at least partway. It is not as bad as the haters like to say (though they have a point), nor is it as good as the fans of it say (though they too have points). This is not my argument by the way, I will write that up after I give it a quick re-read. However, if you are into ponyfic, do give Pen Stroke's other works a shot. Is he the best writer in the fandom? Probably not, but he does have some talent. My favoites of his are Better Living through Science and Ponies, A Potral X MLP crossover, and A Drop of Moonshine, where Celestia gets drunk.