I'd guess no, but I'm not sure. The train-and-volcanoes plan has the sort of hyperbole common in trollfics, but the rest of it is just pure insanity that's very hard to replicate- even the legendary Squirrelking was more comprehensible than this. You'd think that if a troll came up with something as mindbendingly stupid as the drill plan, (s)he'd at least want to make sure the reader knew what it was.

Your subject hit it right on the money. Even skimming through the "chapters," I can see that this fic needs a LOT of help. Can someone with some amount of patience send some concrit his way? This fic was LITERALLY posted yesterday, and there are no reviews, so I am willing to bet at this point that it would do the author some good for someone took the time to slow him down and give him some pointers.

You are right in that case. Despite the mess of a sentence that is "Plus Danso finds love, will he in to puberty or will he defeat it and the drill once and for all.", I can at least tell what the summary is trying to go for. Kind of.

But, seriously, what is going on here? Apparently "Danso Fowl Juillet" is trying to stop a drill from going to the core of "thyne earth"(thine Earth?) because Julius Root doesn't like fairies any more for a reason that was never explained... and someone named Zito is involved and was somehow able to land a jet without being present, but only after filling it with his bodyguards, which would be pointless if he isn't going to be in the helicopter... but he was actually planning something the next floor down so the helicopter's entire presence is pointless... and his plan was that he wants to make the world's fastest train by cutting through the core of the planet with a laser, and also kill people with a volcano? And then all of a sudden, out of nowhere, Mulch Diggums and Holly Short are there, and do nothing of note before the story just stops.
I give up. I have no idea why anything is anywhere, and why anything is happening to anyone.

On another note, if I just drastically misread the plan-describing sentences, which is entirely possible, and Zito's actual end goal is to create trains that are powered by volcanic eruptions, and then run over all of his buisiness rivals with them, he may have created the most blindingly idiotic plan in the history of fanfiction.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9666932/1/ is the fixed link. Also, wow. That's bad.