Subject: Having just reread that section...
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Posted on: 2013-08-27 20:09:00 UTC

...I can say without a doubt that you most certainly have a point about it needing to be rewritten. I mean, it's reasonably clear, but it's far from easy to read, and some of the details could get lost fairly easily. Added to that, it rambles a little. And what all that's leading up to is that yes, I feel like taking a crack at it. I'll post a draft here for approval once I've got one.

~DF

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