Subject: Wow. Just... wow.
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Posted on: 2015-08-18 00:45:00 UTC

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The fic itself was... What. Did. I. Just. Read. The excerpts alone garnering that reaction was enough for me to agree that it isn't Legendary for nothing.

As for the mission itself and the interlude... Good gods. Rina becoming the Reader's caretaker was a heck of a well-done plot twist. But... If Zeb recovers, once he recovers, will he get a new partner? I don't think the Flowers will let him go into missions without one...

Great job, overall, and I can't wait to see the interlude explaining what happened to Rina in the end.

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