Subject: Okay...
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Posted on: 2015-08-17 04:08:00 UTC
I'm coherent now. Iximaz: you have an insanely high tolerance for badfic. Maybe I've been reading too much Mervin and Hyde, but seeing Snape like that... broke me temporarily.
Here, have some chocolate.
At long last, Little Miss Mary is finally dead!
And even better? Mission number forty, guys!
Yes, yes, I realize it's early, but I got moved into college today and already found a D&D group who'll be meeting late tomorrow, thus making me bump posting up. You're welcome. :P
HOWEVER.
The interlude?
Contains massive spoilers if you click it first.
I know this sounds like I'm baiting you, but I promise I am not.
DO NOT CLICK THE INTERLUDE FIRST UNLESS YOU WANT TO BE IMMEDIATELY SPOILED.
Are we clear?
Good.
And, since this mission is a big deal, guys, please make sure your posts are marked with spoilers. I'll even give you a thing to copy-paste into your post when you comment!
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So, you can tell I'm serious about this.
Now then, without further delay!
">The Interlude
Keep ahold of your hats. This is gonna be a wild ride.
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That... I wasn't expecting that. Hopefully, Rina isn't gone for good, she was one of my favorite agents, and I think the first one I read. Actually, the other day I was thinking, "Where's Alex? We haven't seen him in a while," and then this happened and... wow.
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Yeah, this happened. *offers hugs*
If you want to know what happened to the Aviator, check out the interlude further up the Board. That should help sate some of your curiosity. :)
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Fic was so terrible I stopped reading the excerpts after... I think the second one. About Rina and Zeb... Ouch. I hope the Luxray will get better soon, and that Rina didn't actually die in the explosion (Though, if the Ten Years Hence is to be trusted, she... don't quite did?)
I don't know how much is planned about Rina, but if you need reinforcements for a crazy rescue plan I gladly offer all of my Agents and ex-Agents.
Hell, just a wrong word with Corolla by Alex during his internship would be enough to make the little crazy Unison Device try to come up with a way to find where and when Rina ended up, and a way to get through the Time Lock (Which may or may not involve kidnapping the Doctor himself while he's in FicPsych or Medical).
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Try having to read all 168 pages of the fic... *shudders*
Zeb's gonna be getting an interlude soon, and as for RinAviator... well, there's a new interlude up. >:)
They can try to get to Gallifrey all they like, but unless they're able to find a natural plothole, it'll be a very difficult, if not impossible, endeavor. Agents can't access Gallifrey, even with their portal technology, so all they'd be able to do is cross their fingers and hope for the best.
Besides, my Plans are only just beginning...
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The fic itself was... What. Did. I. Just. Read. The excerpts alone garnering that reaction was enough for me to agree that it isn't Legendary for nothing.
As for the mission itself and the interlude... Good gods. Rina becoming the Reader's caretaker was a heck of a well-done plot twist. But... If Zeb recovers, once he recovers, will he get a new partner? I don't think the Flowers will let him go into missions without one...
Great job, overall, and I can't wait to see the interlude explaining what happened to Rina in the end.
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There really isn't much left to say about the fic itself other than GUH.
As for the mission... Heh. DawnFire and I have been plotting this for a while now, and we've just been excited/more than a little relieved at how well everyone's received it. Like I said in earlier posts, there shall be an interlude showing some of what happened so people aren't left hanging.
...I think I might post that today, actually.
As for the future: spoilers, guys. But I am thinking about giving Zeb a new partner sometime in September-ish.
Thanks for reading. :)
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If you guys have theories as to what the future might entail, put 'em here!
So, Rina's ended up on Gallifrey and in the Time War, right? Therefore, there's likely a main universe counterpart to her that has always lived on Gallifrey. She's going to fall into HQ, get partnered with Zeb, and it's going to be chock full of feels like Ixi's stuff always is. What better way to play off of Zeb's guilt than to send everyone a Replacement Goldfish?
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I want her to be MIA during the Time War (the Reader wouldn't know if she survived... I think), just so Ixi could pull a Moffat-style trick and bring her back like he brought Gallifrey back... But that's just wishful thinking, I'm sure of it.
I ended up crying in the middle of the night after I read this, just so you know. :V
Very, very well done!
You know what me showing up means?
I swear to all the authors, when we get back HQ, I’m going to be having serious words with the Flowers.
Missing word.
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Alas, it doesn’t happen. Or – maybe – after many years?
I didn’t expect that Rina would become Arin. Very well played, Ixi and Dawn.
HG
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Can't tell you what's in the future, except that the TYH Ave had isn't canon. As for what happened to Rina after leaving... Expect an interlude within a few days.
And thank you very much; we've been plotting this thing for months now, and we've been excited to see how it's received. I'm glad to hear you liked it!
An interesting thing, but a thing none the less. I... I need some time to process what just happened.
I'll talk when I pull my head together.
I mean. Just... And the whole thing with Rina...
running off to join the Druids...
I need some time...But you already know I loved the mission and the interlude. It was a wild ride indeed. Thank you for sharing it with us.
I'm coherent now. Iximaz: you have an insanely high tolerance for badfic. Maybe I've been reading too much Mervin and Hyde, but seeing Snape like that... broke me temporarily.
Here, have some chocolate.
My secret was M&Ms. I think I went through two full-sized bags of them while writing this thing.
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(I mean it SPOILERS AHEAD!)
I'm gonna miss Rina.
And, should he not recover, Zeb.
And I feel so very sorry for Alex.
First of all, I called it! You pulled a Scott Cawthon and released it earlier! :D
Okay, let's start... Oh, right... the thing you mentioned:
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There, happy? Now we go!
1) Zeb... I love you, buddy, and bless your fur, really... but you just couldn't stop yourself and not report the previous accident!?
2) "Actually, I'm from Sinnoh." Again, bless your fur, Zeb :)
3) Ouch... now I feel sorry for Rina and the whole Bleeprin thing. Also, not only Des but also Alfred Pennyworth would feel offended with the whole tea issue! And me, as a matter of fact! I make wonderful tea!
4) Okay, HarryMary starts imitating Cho Chang's 'hip-wiggle'... Where's my Bleeprin?
5) ..."Margaret Thatcher naked on a cold day!"... Now, THAT'S going into my dictionary!
6) *The bath scene* Okay, just some boring, poorly written teasing, nothing to see here... *'first knuckle'* OOOOH, THERE WE GO!
7) Oh, the 'wand = d*ck' comparison... Wow, never seen that before...
8) I said this before but... poor Rina. There must be some kind of way out for her to dull the bad memories. Unless you're trying to get her fully insane and discharged... Oh no... y-you're not... are you?
9) Wow, any mention of druids is apparently Rina's Pavlov reaction... Not that I'm surprised.
10) Awww, I wanna Death Easters! It's so cute!
11) No... no, no, no... no, I'm done... I can't...
I need a break...
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Okay, we're back after Remus and Sirius having their hot wolf-on-man action.
12) No! Zeb, endure it!
13) ...Zeb...?
14) ZEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEB!!!!!!
15) Rina, what are you doing...?
16) AND WE WELCOME THE AVIATOR ON BOARD! Aside the whole Zeb situation, I'm happy that she decided to accept her new persona!
17) No... I can't handle the interlude in this post. I'm done. We're done here!
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1) Well, it wasn't so much an accident as it was 'Rina flying off the hook and going batcrap crazy'.
8) She's allergic to all Bleep products and metabolizes alcohol too well to get drunk, sorry.
12, 13, 14) ZEB INDEED.
15) She finally snapped for good.
16) Sorry, not exactly. See, Ten Years Hence stories aren't always canon, y'see. Try scrolling down to the bottom of this and take a good long look at the categories. The Time War ain't exactly good for your health, you know.
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All the "dead agents" category said was that all the agents in it died at least once, and didn't necessarily stay dead... ;)
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Double spoilers, because this is for more of an Easter Egg reference than anything else.
First off, the mission was incredible. You did a great job with both the fic itself and the storytelling portion of it. I was really blown away.
If Rina really is killed off, though, it feels kind of... anti-climatic. I mean, we don't even really see what happens to her. On the other hand, you've heavily foreshadowed the idea of her regenerating and coming back. I'd much rather see that than have her just vanish. It's up to you, of course, that's just my two cents.
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There is going to be an interlude, of sorts, titled "Snippets of Gallifrey" that will be released within the next few weeks. As for what else the future holds... Spoilers. ;)
And thank you so much! I (and my small army of betas) have been working very hard on this to make sure it was good, and I'm glad to hear you liked it so much.
Wut.
Wut.
Wut.
Seriously, what was that?
Okay, John and Mary? Like, Winchester?
...OH NO YOU DID NOT STEAL MY NAME FOR YOUR HELLSPAWN, SUETHOR!
D-:
...Wow, I'm not completely incoherent.
Are basically the two most common English names. Plus there's Biblical symbolism as well. I very much doubt the author was thinking of Supernatural.
"John and Mary" always makes me think of the eccentric, dysfunctional husband and wife on I'm Sorry, I'll Read That Again.
Be very careful before you post. This mission has been months in the making, with a ton of thought and care and love put into it. Don't be the person who ruins it for someone else because you forgot a spoiler tag!