Subject: Fixed?
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Posted on: 2015-08-12 20:02:00 UTC
Theia is still there.
Also, I suspect that there are other remnants of Tera and Theia having been in the original draft:
“Well, it was a pleasure to work with all of you,” Zeb said, now back in Luxray form.
“Likewise!” said Ari cheerfully. “And let us know if you need backup with magical girl fic, yeah?
HG
Rina and Zeb team up with Ari to take care of
An Overabundance of Snrfs.
Snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf snrf!
This makes me wonder what a Sue-pov looks like...
It probably goes, "Snrf~!"
Or maybe SNRF!1!!!!1!
Come to think of it, I think there's a Stu-pov in the mission I'm writing... considering that the Stu has a blak cutie mark, I bet it'll be blak and red and glittery. (There is literally a black-and red alicorn Sue. She probably has bat wings, though her description was vague enough it was unclear. As well as a red-black-and-blak 'stalion' Stu. Sounds like a recipe for an emo pov.)
"SNRRRF SNRF-SNRRRRRF SNRF-SNRRRRRRF, SNRF SNRF, SNRF SNRF, SNRF SNRRR-RRRRRRF!"
My favorite part was the POV stampede and how those things were used to get rid of the Sue. That was fun! Also, I want a POV. Or else just a pov, since those take up less room. XD
Also, @firemagic, I was wondering if we could start on our co-write ASAP. I'm ready if you are now that I've reached that point in my agents' timeline.
*holds out squirming Continuity Cat* His name is Ciel POV; he's a mini rather than an actual POV since I didn't know POVs were separate creatures when I wrote my second mission. Take him if you want him.
I SAW YOUR NEW FRIENDS
I WANT ONE
THAT'S A LIE
I WANT ALL OF THEM
THEY'RE SO FLUFFY!!!!!! =OD
I especially love what you did with the POVS. *snrf* I quite enjoyed the mission, and though I'm only familiar with Percy Jackson, I didn't feel totally lost all of the time. Two things, though.
“Hello, Chiron POV. “Wow. Does canon!Dionysus mess up names to that level, or is this just Flanderization? And Chiron rolling his eyes - that doesn’t seem quite in character for a centaur older than every modern civilization.”
Extra quotation mark.
“And how does Bianca’s soul show up on the map?” asked Theia, incredulity evident in each syllable
I thought for a moment that another agent had somehow come along and just escaped my notice up to that point, but she's not mentioned anywhere else.
Tera and Theia were in the original draft, and it looks like we missed cutting that out. ^^;
Glad you liked it!
Theia is still there.
Also, I suspect that there are other remnants of Tera and Theia having been in the original draft:
“Well, it was a pleasure to work with all of you,” Zeb said, now back in Luxray form.
“Likewise!” said Ari cheerfully. “And let us know if you need backup with magical girl fic, yeah?
HG