Subject: I apologise.
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Posted on: 2015-08-02 20:26:00 UTC

Two of those agents are just bit characters responsible for recruiting the others, but you're right. I plan on cutting the character number down to just two agents.

I really thought I'd done everything I could in regards to making sure my SPaG was up to scratch, but apparently I failed at something. Do you have any advice for how I could make sure I don't make the mistake of submitting something like this again?

Thank you for the con crit though, it's good to know what I need to work on.

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