Subject: Very good mission.
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Posted on: 2015-07-31 00:01:00 UTC
I've never seen the Lorax movie, so kudos for making the mission (and the charges) understandable (I only needed to go on a wiki once, and that was pre-mission, to figure out who/what a "Once-Ler" was).
And only one error:
tightening the grip on the rifle which was now her’s, apparently.
Delete the apostrophe.
A new solo mission? Impossible! Haha, well, yeah, I finally got one done after a heck of a busy summer (so far, anyway). With that, I hope you all enjoy the return of Pony Boy and Glitter Girl in...
"For Need of a Thneed"
I've never seen the Lorax movie, so kudos for making the mission (and the charges) understandable (I only needed to go on a wiki once, and that was pre-mission, to figure out who/what a "Once-Ler" was).
And only one error:
tightening the grip on the rifle which was now her’s, apparently.
Delete the apostrophe.
... but mainly I'm just poking Skar because he's not showing up on Hangouts or anything. You've got mail!
...I'm sorry to say that Real Life has been keeping me busy beyond any reasonable capacity. It's why I've been so hard pressed to write missions as of late, and why I can't really find the time to e-talk with you guys in the daytime.
That and, well, if my dad found out that I use Hangouts to chat with people on the other side of the country, he'd probably murder me in my sleep. :'(
Regardless, I did send you an email.