Subject: I beta-read this, and liked it...
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Posted on: 2015-07-28 01:20:00 UTC
... but mainly I'm just poking Skar because he's not showing up on Hangouts or anything. You've got mail!
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New Mission! by
on 2015-07-27 21:36:00 UTC
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A new solo mission? Impossible! Haha, well, yeah, I finally got one done after a heck of a busy summer (so far, anyway). With that, I hope you all enjoy the return of Pony Boy and Glitter Girl in...
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Very good mission. by
on 2015-07-31 00:01:00 UTC
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I've never seen the Lorax movie, so kudos for making the mission (and the charges) understandable (I only needed to go on a wiki once, and that was pre-mission, to figure out who/what a "Once-Ler" was).
And only one error:
tightening the grip on the rifle which was now her’s, apparently.
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Thanks, and fixed! :D (nm) by
on 2015-07-31 14:49:00 UTC
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I read this whole thing, AND ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT. (nm) by
on 2015-07-28 23:00:00 UTC
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Thank you kindly! ^_^ (nm) by
on 2015-07-29 04:59:00 UTC
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I beta-read this, and liked it... by
on 2015-07-28 01:20:00 UTC
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... but mainly I'm just poking Skar because he's not showing up on Hangouts or anything. You've got mail!
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Much as I'd like to chat... by
on 2015-07-28 01:50:00 UTC
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...I'm sorry to say that Real Life has been keeping me busy beyond any reasonable capacity. It's why I've been so hard pressed to write missions as of late, and why I can't really find the time to e-talk with you guys in the daytime.
That and, well, if my dad found out that I use Hangouts to chat with people on the other side of the country, he'd probably murder me in my sleep. :'( -
Well, that sucks. by
on 2015-07-28 01:52:00 UTC
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Regardless, I did send you an email.