Subject: :D
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Posted on: 2015-07-01 21:27:00 UTC
Thanks to both of you! The first prompt was written after the second, so I had a much better idea of Bosh'Guk's character in particular. Anyway, glad to hear it's enjoyable. I had a lot of fun writing it!
After about 5 different iterations, 7 scrapped agent concepts, and about a year of procrastination, I finally have this thing done. Here goes nuthin'!
Permission Request
/cautiously steals some of Iximaz's cakefetti and throws it/
Hoom, hoom.
*clears throat*
Right!
Activity: do I know you? You've been here long enough. Though I did spy a certain RL-induced drop in activity recently.
PPC knowledge: I do not see anything blatantly wrong. Or wrong. Or anything. You're good.
Fic to spork: I read one chapter and went 'augh' and I have it from credible sources the rest is just as bad.
Writing ability (creative): Gungan agent, oh yes, how didn't we think about this before? It's hilarious! I also particularly like how Bosh'Guk argues with him... themselves?
The first prompt is okayish, but the second had me clutching my ribs. All good.
Writing ability (technical): I don't see any booboos. I also know get your pieces beta'd, so I'm confident I won't be seeing any "My Immortal" clones growing up from under your pen before dragging themselves to a lake and plopping in, tentacles writhing.
Therefore, unless another PG objects: Permission Granted.
Conga rats, dood.
My activity will be nill for the rest few days.
*blows noisemaker* Here's a plastic Velociraptor and a box of peanut butter cookies!
I actually liked the first prompt more than the second. The Murlock disguise was appropriate and fun. Anyway, everything else was spot on.
-Phobos
You were thinking what I was thinking after all!
Thanks to both of you! The first prompt was written after the second, so I had a much better idea of Bosh'Guk's character in particular. Anyway, glad to hear it's enjoyable. I had a lot of fun writing it!