And when did Kyaris get the extra head? According to her entry in the PPC Wiki, she had seven heads, but here, she has eight.

So far, it's well written. One tiny error slipped through, though:
We already invoked the Ispace Accords with Jurisfiction; OFUU was the logical next step.

Shouldn't that be "OFUDisc"?

I've to admit, writing Richard's, Alice's, Thumper's and Granite's scenes as I've okay enough knowledge of the setting.

I'll take your suggestions and advice to heart and start re-editing my parts to improve upon the story as much as possible.

Cheers for taking the time to give the Prologue a look over. I'll be sure to pass on the parts you suggested we work on and we are currently looking for a beta, awaiting responses from any we've contacted already.

The intelligence report was a fun read as well.

If you choose to read on, I hope you enjoy the story.

As I've stated previously, we have got plans for this fic, right now, it's just a matter of getting all of us online at the same time with spare time to write in.

ANd I also like how you put it - it's the PPC, expect the unexpected to mess up poor agents' lives.

That bit of calling in canons to help was interesting, too.