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Posted on: 2015-06-13 05:55:00 UTC

This may or may not get a tad opinionated. I'm not as well versed in popular media as I'd like to be but I know of some really good examples that I feel are worth sharing.

My idea of a genuinely creepy antagonist is one who knows and understands you on a personal level, or vice versa. The former because he is not only relatable to you but also knows how to well and truly ruin you, and the latter because you get the sense that this could be you, or at least someone you know. How either of these can be expressed in the character can vary depending on the writer and the audience but in general they are basically the incarnations of things that the viewer is afraid of, and those that have the potential to damage them on a personal level can be especially terrifying. Especially if they have the public backing them up. For example, my idea of a truly scary villain would play on my own fear of losing face due to exposure of my personal faults, with said character broadcasting the hero's worst secrets to the entire world and getting everyone to hate them. Or, if the reader fears being wrongfully accused by the masses, Tumblr style, the villain could spread hateful rumors among the populace with a similar result.

On the flipside, there’s also the villain who could very easily turn up in real life and affect the people around them no less differently than their fictional counterpart. That's why Dolores Umbridge is so widely hated because really, who HASN'T had at least one teacher as despicable as her? Another good starting point could be emotional manipulation in that the villain convinces the heroes that they are in the wrong, even if it's not true, which is something that happens a lot in real life as well. Again, if the character has a public reputation and following, even better, since those who admire the character could easily turn against you if you try to speak against their idol.

By the way, you don’t have to worry about projecting your own fears into a scary villain, because lots of writers do that in canon, and I know I would. The key is to make sure your audience can also relate to whatever makes your villain so frightening. In my opinion, if there's anything a good book or movie must be, it's engaging. And the same goes for the characters of these works, antagonistic or otherwise.

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