Fic Query

Fic Query by [EvilAI]UBEROverlord on 2015-04-18 09:56:00 UTC

Re: Fic Query by Tira on 2015-04-18 18:46:00 UTC Reply

Discontinued fics are perfectly acceptable as mission targets. This one seems a bit short to me, but since I've never actually written a mission, I don't have room to comment.

As far as quality goes, I'm not familiar with the canon, but a recurring OC who shares traits with the writer is never a good sign, and the bit I read seems to have a drastically different tone than the actual series.

Tone is drastically different by [EvilAI]UBEROverlord on 2015-04-18 19:23:00 UTC Reply

Even in that short bit Hild is very OC. Tone is drastically different. Angels do not work that way in canon, the entire Hidden One is wrong, they do not exist in the canon. The three sisters being on Earth like that is just wrong. There are a few other breaches too. I also think it makes light of both Survivor's Guilt and Depression. And the OC is definitely a Stu. Even at a minimum he would have more power than the three Goddesses and by the words probably more than the canon's equivalent of God.

As an unrelated side note... by [EvilAI]UBEROverlord on 2015-04-19 09:10:00 UTC Reply

Of all my fanons, that was the one I was least expecting to get violently angry about. In fact, that was the only time a fic got me angry. Usually its more of annoyance if anything.