Subject: Oh yeah, that thing. ^_^;
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Posted on: 2015-04-17 16:29:00 UTC
My main thought was... why did she need killing? I think this is a case where we could benefit from seeing more of the badfic. The story as we readers get to see it is:
____ sneaks into the Mountain, just like Bilbo. She flatters Smaug, just like Bilbo. Smaug says he wants to keep her, which is admittedly weird. Smaug threatens her about dwarves, just like Bilbo. You tell us - but don't show - that ____ tells Smaug some stuff about the dwarves. Then Smaug decides to keep her.
I mean, okay, it's a bit on the weird side, but... I guess what I want to know is the details around the final quote. Did Smaug spend some time being convinced to like her? Did he flip straight from 'you stink of dwarf' to 'snuggletime'? Is there anything after?
I feel like I missed out on the story here.
hS
(Also, she seems to not have the Ring? Is that right? That would explain why Smaug didn't try to set her on fire - he knew she couldn't escape. Er... Bilbo did wear the Ring for the interview in the film, right? Please tell me he did.)