Subject: What is up with the yandere!Character trend?
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Posted on: 2015-04-11 18:28:00 UTC
I've seen several fics (mostly on Quotev) that advertise yandere versions of more-or-less stable canon characters, frequently targeting a reader-insert. Why would anyone want to be in that situation? It's not even like Twilight, where the creepy behavior is unacknowledged as such. Maybe I'm a hypocrite, since Yuno Gasai is one of my favorite characters, but it's not like I want to be Yukki, either.
On topic, you did a good job with this mission - I managed to follow it fine despite having no experience with the canon. One thing you might want to do is mention that Tomoko and Mokocchi are the same person, as it took me a little bit to catch on to that.