Typo? by
Hieronymus Graubart
on 2015-04-02 15:47:00 UTC
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...just with a bit a flirting from Rachnera.
Shouldn’t this be "a bit of flirting"?
I don’t know Monster Musume, so my only comment is: read it, didn’t understand half of it, liked what I did understand, find nothing else to say.
HG
Good work! by
eatpraylove
on 2015-03-30 19:05:00 UTC
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A little shorter than I'm used to, but not every mission has to be forty-something pages, y'know?
I liked the bit at the end where Lala's head landed in Valon's lap. XD Does that happen in canon, her head landing wherever the joke demands?