Zeb hesitated, but handed to her.
Missing Word.

Rina’s eyes widened a bit at hearing that, but then laughed to herself.
The image is hilarious, but since there are at least two eyes involved, shouldn’t they have laughed to themselves?
Reconsidering this, there may just a word be missing again.

HG

I don't see why the Sue couldn't regenerate in space.

She'd just die again... and regenerate again... etc.... but, she could probably regenerate.

I like missions taking on multiple fics, because they are good at showcasing just how ridiculously similar the Sues can be.
And your Agents had really good interaction. And some good jokes. I loved the "Is that some kind of bird?" "Yes, let's just go with that" part.

The Rose bashing in the second one is really egregious. I mean, I don't care for her much, but I was completely disgusted by the way the Sue was treating her.

I really like the way you're handling Rina. One thing that I think is hard with Time Lord characters is making their regenerations have distinct personalities, but still having them be the same person. With Rina, I feel like you've hit the right balance.

It's not early April yet. You need to slow down. And probably stop eating so much chocolate/coffee/other stimulant. :-p
Also: yay, new mission! ^_^
Also also: *sigh* Why's it always 'oh I'm [insert canon here]'s daughter and I'm a speshul snowflake *glitters*'?

*sigh* Here, have a Lava Cookie for each Agent, now off to rest with you!

(Great work as always anyway! =P)