Subject: Common mistakes in writing?
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Posted on: 2015-03-24 01:53:00 UTC
More specifically, writing a character. What would you say is the most common mistake young authors make in writing a character?
Subject: Common mistakes in writing?
Author:
Posted on: 2015-03-24 01:53:00 UTC
More specifically, writing a character. What would you say is the most common mistake young authors make in writing a character?
When I create a character, I look at characters I like. I ask myself the following questions after doing so:
"can this person fit here?"
"how do they react by fitting here?"
Then I look at their past: "what was one major event in their past, and how do they look if it turns out differently?"
And finally: "what can I give this person from my self, without making them a self-insert?"
These steps are not followed properly in the case of a new writer, who often fails to create a character who fits in with the setting, and instead makes a character that does not fit at all. For instance, let's say I write a COD fanfic. If my OC is from the future, is Tony Stark's niece, and is sooo badass that they can floor Soap? Does not fit.
Another thing that is often tossed aside is consideration for a character's place in a story. A character is there to interact with the world. It doesn't matter how good your characters are if you spend so little time on the background and the setting that you can't tell one city from another. If there even are cities, it might just be "generic location" which is very, very bad.
You want your character to be original and creative, but they can't stick out too much.
I would be careful picking a character you like, because if one is not careful there is a chance they may just end up as you could end up with a Captain Ersatz or Expy of said character. Even if you do not intend to do it, your subconscious may do it for you.
(which I'll get to in a moment), I think one of the biggest mistakes is being too nice or too mean to a character. Either they get all the things in life handed to them on a platter for no reason, or every bad thing to ever happen ever, again for no reason. You gotta strike a happy balance, which can vary depending on the setting— after all, (modern) fairy tale characters tend to get the 'happily ever after' more often than dystopian characters for a reason— and make your characters deserve/earn their punishments and rewards.
As for self-inserts, they can be done well, but the best-done SIs are the ones that are most representative of the author, not an idealized version.
Lemme drag one of my childhood make-believe selves out for a moment. She was shy, quiet, and liked to read, and was a little bit lazy, which is all fine and dandy until you also take into account that she looked human except for her yellow, slit-pupiled eyes, black leathery wings, spiky black tail, and ability to breathe fire. Did I mention she was half-Hungarian Horntail and hatched from an egg, and Charlie Weasley brought her home as a baby where she was raised as Ron's twin sister? ...I had weird fantasies as a kid.
Yeah, no. Don't go the 'ideal you' route. It hardly ever, if at all, ends well.
Anyway, there's my ten cents.
This is great advice for beginning writers. :D
Life can be great and it can be soul-crushing, but everybody has their good and bad moments! Don't make your character's life too perfect or too depressing.
I personally think that normal people flung into crazy worlds are the most interesting stories. And I'm not talking about that "omg u have hidden powers!!1" stuff.
Compared to most self-inserts I've seen, that's not actually that bad. The only thing that gets me is that she's half-Hungarian Horntail and Ron's twin sister. Which one of her parents was drunk?
Don't we all know...
Probably making a character where the starting point and main aspect is the powers, or how cool they are, instead of the personality and suchlike!
Starting with the powers is a bad, bad idea. I've seen it a lot, and the character ends up being pretty shallow in terms of development. Make your character, and then embellish with powers and talents that fit.
Although, what I'd really like to see is a story about a character who's powers are totally different from their personality and they have to come to terms w/it. That would be cool.
Anyway, the bottom line is-CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT, kids!
I would say first and foremost putting too much of oneself in the character. A character should be a part of you, but not a thinly veiled you. This by its very nature leads itself to characters that if not outright Sues are certainly Sueish. But on a related not, too flawed is another very common one.
Those are the biggest ones in my opinion. Though there are certainly others.
OCs are often based off their creators, whether intentionally or not. Often sues are simply "better" versions of their creators, which is a little sad. A character can be a hero even if they don't have any powers and talents!
Especially since it really does not take too much effort to make a character truly original. Then again I may be over simplifying it. I personally do not have a lot of difficulty with the characters, at least not anymore. Early on that was not the case. As it was my first attempt at organized writing was a fanfic I wrote 11 or so years ago. It probably borders, if not strays into, badfic territory. The OC I created for that was basically a self-insert with Force Powers and certainly Sueish.
My first attempt was in kindergarten.
I think that speaks for itself.
I cannot even look at the first page of that fic without wanting to grab something sharp and pointy. Though I do not know if it is really that bad or I'm just overly critical of it.
It involved chainsaws, and the lead character literally bled testosterone. Fortunately, I went back, and corrected it so that it is now a parody stufic. If I find it, I'll gladly post it. I'm sure we all have badfic in our closets that might be fun to read dramatically. You going to post your badfic, or not? Cause I kind of want to read it now.
You can find it over on the Pit. I already posted a link for it on an earlier thread, though that is no longer first page. I do not know if it is sporkable bad, but it is bad. The reason is I cannot tell how bad it really is. Because I know what I have done since then, so by comparison it looks bad. I'll post it again because I am still curious to see how bad it really is. IF I recall it basically featured a Young Teen Super Jedi, a bad three way crossover that makes little to no sense. And more than a few cannons out of character. And badly. It is a Code Lyoko/Star Wars/Star Trek Crossover
If it is legitimately a badfic, and its not just me being my own harshest critic, I am going go ahead and call dibs on that one.
Here it is
After all, we're most critical of ourselves! I mean, seriously, she could talk to birds and oh god my stomach I have to go