Subject: Aside from the self-insert thing...
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Posted on: 2015-03-24 03:32:00 UTC

(which I'll get to in a moment), I think one of the biggest mistakes is being too nice or too mean to a character. Either they get all the things in life handed to them on a platter for no reason, or every bad thing to ever happen ever, again for no reason. You gotta strike a happy balance, which can vary depending on the setting— after all, (modern) fairy tale characters tend to get the 'happily ever after' more often than dystopian characters for a reason— and make your characters deserve/earn their punishments and rewards.

As for self-inserts, they can be done well, but the best-done SIs are the ones that are most representative of the author, not an idealized version.

Lemme drag one of my childhood make-believe selves out for a moment. She was shy, quiet, and liked to read, and was a little bit lazy, which is all fine and dandy until you also take into account that she looked human except for her yellow, slit-pupiled eyes, black leathery wings, spiky black tail, and ability to breathe fire. Did I mention she was half-Hungarian Horntail and hatched from an egg, and Charlie Weasley brought her home as a baby where she was raised as Ron's twin sister? ...I had weird fantasies as a kid.

Yeah, no. Don't go the 'ideal you' route. It hardly ever, if at all, ends well.

Anyway, there's my ten cents.

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