Subject: Protectorate of Plort Outpost!
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Posted on: 2015-03-10 01:26:00 UTC
Well, sort of. The next one isn't planned until June. But meanwhile, I somehow managed to take the RP that sprung from the last thread and make it into a semi-coherent... thing. Much thanks to Iximaz and sonofheaven176, who helped me polish it up.
Um, enjoy?
...has of late been stricken by earthquakes. Aid from Baronies Neshomeh and Huinesoron has helped with the worst of the destruction.
I think there may have been an error in the original thread. Barony Neshomeh appears to be far away from this land. Shouldn’t the aid have come from the adjacent Baronies Phobos and Huinesoron? Or do these "earthquakes" refer to something I don’t get?
Also, the Poor Cynick appears to be a bit repetitive. He has wandered the lands of all of all four nations in the past.
"Lady Iximaz," — the Dark Civilian bowed — "I would like to give you some of the gold I have brought as payment for the delayed taxes; Baron Huinesoron and Baron Neshomeh had quarreled over my town.
Now that’s clearly an error. Before the new Barony Iximaz was formed, Critta-Kalthin was at the border of Baronies Huinesoron and Phobos.
she almost spat the words, thought that might have been a rattling cough talking
This should probably be "though".
HG
I need to be more active and reread past correspondences. Sorry for the mistake. I am the one who wrote that.
... represent the (ongoing?) collapse of the PPC's older Freewebs/Webs sites, as Webs shuts them down. Neshomeh's been the one trying to save them all off, so Barony Neshomeh sent the aid.
You're right about Critta-Kalthin, though; that's definitely a hS-Phobos dispute.
hS
That's totally my mistake. Iximaz copied that faithfully from my message.
That's what I get for not double-checking. It seems like Iximaz fixed those while I caught the last.
Can you add this to the Cyclopaedia somewhere?
Might need a little while to figure out precisely where to put it, though. It takes place over four or more baronies, and involves large numbers of people... perhaps I should just link to it from all of them?
I'unno. I'll think about it.
hS 
My searching-fu is weak, it would seem.