Subject: The land between the Friwep and Wep rivers...
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Posted on: 2015-03-11 11:32:00 UTC

...has of late been stricken by earthquakes. Aid from Baronies Neshomeh and Huinesoron has helped with the worst of the destruction.
I think there may have been an error in the original thread. Barony Neshomeh appears to be far away from this land. Shouldn’t the aid have come from the adjacent Baronies Phobos and Huinesoron? Or do these "earthquakes" refer to something I don’t get?

Also, the Poor Cynick appears to be a bit repetitive. He has wandered the lands of all of all four nations in the past.

"Lady Iximaz," — the Dark Civilian bowed — "I would like to give you some of the gold I have brought as payment for the delayed taxes; Baron Huinesoron and Baron Neshomeh had quarreled over my town.
Now that’s clearly an error. Before the new Barony Iximaz was formed, Critta-Kalthin was at the border of Baronies Huinesoron and Phobos.

she almost spat the words, thought that might have been a rattling cough talking
This should probably be "though".

HG

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