Am I still allowed here if I haven't been able to get on for months?


Anyway, I just kind of made an Original Character, and I was curious what people would think of her, so I thought I could ask you guys, if that's okay? Maybe? If it's not okay I'll take this down immediately and I'm sorry.



Name: Avatar Yama
Age: 16 at story start, 167 at death
Gender: Cisgender Female
Orientation: Aromantic Asexual
Nationality: Air Nomad
Occupation: Second Avatar, First Airbender Avatar, Preceded By Avatar Wan, Succeeded By Avatar Nasak
Likes: Flying, dancing, swimming, bending, Wan, fighting, Raava, balance, open air
Dislikes: Confined spaces, liars, holding still, meditation, condescension, Vaatu, being helpless, spiders

Growing up in Avatar Wan’s new age, Yama never dreamed of succeeding her hero himself. But when a group of bandits from the new Earth Kingdom threaten her home at the recently built Air Sanctuary, Yama shocks all by entering the Avatar State when the bandits’ leader threatens to kill her mother. After growing up in the pacifistic society of the Air Nomads, Yama feels guilty over her new passion for fighting. She often feels overshadowed by Wan, despite encouragement from him to follow her own path. As the Second Avatar, Yama has no guidance except for Raava and Wan, because no one knows that the Avatar has reincarnated, and everyone believes Wan and Raava are gone from the world. The pressure of her new responsibilities is overwhelming, but Yama desires greatly to make a name for herself in the world beyond the Air Sanctuary. And now, with the troubled peace of Wan’s era finally shattering, and a new threat called the Shadowwalker looming, Yama will finally have the chance to acquit herself. But darkness is encroaching, and Yama needs all her wits about her to defeat the Shadowwalker, become a fully realized Avatar, and continue Wan’s mission to bring balance and peace to the world.


Does she sound cool at all, so far? Is she a Mary Sue?