Hello, I am the author of this fanfic. the reason there is almost no characterization is because the prequel has most of it. Duly noted though, i'll try to add it more. All of the author's notes are mainly because I don't like to leave people hanging. I just like to give a reason for why I haven't been updating. Thanks for this though, I'll try to do better :)

I HEARD MY NAME AND CAME AT YOUR SUMMONS, THOUGH YOU PUNY MORTALS-

Oh, hi, Scapegrace. Wassup?

*reads through the fic*

*falls over convulsing*

I see PJO, HoO, KC, Doctor Who, Bionicle, Harry Potter, Star Wars, Torchwood, 39 Clues, Eragon... and that's just in the disclaimer and summary. Holy cripes. Fortunately, I am familiar with all of those except Bionicle and Torchwood (though I could probably figure out what's not canon if the PJO errors are anything to go by)- wait, did you say DragonBallZ? Never watched that, either. Hrm. I dunno, this looks like a doozy.

"Timestopper", would be more closely rendered like "Χρονοστάσια;" (Chronostásia). Ώραπώμα (Órapóma) is so completely and absolutely wrong in so many ways, for starters, Greek words never have more than one tilde.

Um. Okay. Not gonna lie, I have no knowledge of, what was it, Young Justice? So right from the get-go I've been a bit confused. I keep picturing Violet from The Boxcar Children and Wally from Pokémon. ^^;

Anyway, aside from the... Justice Team? being invited to participate in the Triwizard Tournament (seriously, wat? Why? Is either Beauxbatons or Durmstrang being left out in favor of the Justice Team?), the first major canon break I see is Wally claiming that Mrs. Weasley is his mother's sister. Nope— Mrs. Weasley had two brothers, Gideon and Fabian. That's it.

Then there's the sudden seemingly blatant disregard for the International. Statute of Secrecy. Usually the only acceptions made to this rule are for family members (how the Young Justice team is related, I don't know, so maybe it's not a charge).

I can only think of one instance where the twins referred to themselves as 'Gred and Forge', and that was as a joke in PS/SS. Hermione letting out little screams of horror seems OOC. And the twins seem very touchy-feely around Violet. I also have a hard time seeing them being friends with a Slytherin; they're a might biased.

And honestly, just because the most vocal Slytherins we see in the books hate Muggle-borns doesn't mean they all do. Don't you just love when fan writers take things to the extreme? Besides, she really doesn't act Slytherin-y, especially when she goes talking about her 'hero instincts'. That's definitely a Gryffindor trait.

After that, it looks like Violet just worms her way into the narrative and is generally obnoxious, but I can't get past chapter four because she's making me mad. "No shit Sherlock" and "Suck up", plus the fact she can speak ten languages, feels very much of Rose Potter. Bleagh.

Oh, and the twins never nearly jumped out of the box to impress the Veela. That was Harry and Ron. Then there was inserting of movie canon.

If you want me to take a closer look at this, I can... *grimaces and readies spork*

Long answer: Effectively, Green Lanterns are chosen by the Rings upon the death or retirement of the previous one. Is astronomically rare (pun intended) that children of former Lanterns become Lanterns themselves, as our good friend Amon Sur can attest; with only two known cases, Arisia and Soranik Natu. And even rarer still, is an underage Lantern being chosen with the only known case being Arisia, again; being the physical and mental equivalent of twelve. Arisia is a double special case due to the customs of her native planet.

Also the chronologically youngest known Green Lantern, was Kyle Rayner, chosen at 18 years old (Arisia was 200!) and, like Arisia, was a very special case.

Also, as long as we're talking about Tolkien-verse goodfic, have you read Sansûkh yet? It's super long but super good, and it (mostly) centers on Thorin and the Company.

More please... My brain nearly got a Blue Screen of Death, thanks to the badness of this fic.