Subject: Well, that second one is not that bad.
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Posted on: 2015-02-08 22:32:00 UTC

Considering that the Dragonborn/Dovahkiin is by him/herself a Canon Stu/Sue, and pretty much depends on player input for his/her personality, so he/she can be a softie, a jerk, or a downright psychopath, weeell the protagonist's personality is quite a non-issue here. Also, the NPC canons aren't that OOC (with one exception, see below).

On the other hand, in the few chapters that I read; her stupid name is an affront to all Nords, creates 2 minis (the second one a mini-Sue!), and to top it off, somehow she suddenly knows Savos Aren with no good explanation and throws him off OOC for good measure.

(Now that I put that way, it does sound quite bad, and somehow I get the feeling that later gets worse... But I'm not reading those 50 chapters.)

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