Subject: Well, here's my reaction.
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Posted on: 2016-07-15 20:28:00 UTC

Can't believe I went on that website...

K'eth:

Can... can I just say this guy looks ridiculously OP? "Anything he imagines comes true and well lets just say he really likes permanent passive abilities", his weapons ("if someone/thing grabs the sword or uses it without K'eth's permission he/she will immediately go insane and start to fear everything and everyone. Ultimately resulting in the thing/person to commit suicide usually with Fearstriker itself.", "One last thing unlike Fearstriker in which you grab or use it with out K'eth's consent and then you go insane in Deathbringer's case it just kills you out right", "Sporting 10,000 different effects and abilities, can never be disenchanted and having unlimited uses.") are broken as heck and have urple description, and his personality ("Extremely happy go lucky he just wings it most of the time with out any real plan but then again does he really need plans?") just screams Gary Stu to me.

After that, I have to admit I just kind of skimmed through the others because the first left a bitter taste in my mouth, but do any of these characters have, well, a character to them besides "Look at all the powers and abilities they have!!"? "when killed Dreamweaver will resurrect itself (via pulling itself back together (this resurrection can't not be stopped)) and become ten times stronger then the thing that killed it as well as gaining a few of it's powers"? "Access to everysingle kind of nercomatic power there ever was. though seems to hold the Guild Wars spells in high regard"? The personality sections you provided for these collections of powers (because that's all they really are at this point) are brief and don't tell me anything about them other than 'this character is X, except when they're not, because of Y.'

And you might want to get a beta before posting something for the general public to read. The page you linked was so full of errors I almost gave up at the beginning and pretty much didn't bother with any ability bundles after that.

I'd like to list the good things I found in this, but... all I can really suggest is next time you create characters, make characters and not a collection of super-awesome powers and abilities and weapons with a vague personality description slapped on. Unless that was exactly what you were going for, and in that case, disregard all of the above.

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