Subject: On critiquing humor.
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Posted on: 2016-06-30 16:38:00 UTC

First - I'm pretty surprised no one's arguing with anything I said. Nobody found any flaw with any of that stuff I typed out on the spur of the moment without the time to really think it through first? I'm shocked, and maybe a bit appalled if that rather depressing scenario is true. O.o

That said, I've been thinking more about the need to review missions, because I do stand by that. It strikes me that a) reviewing is hard, and b) reviewing humor is harder. Missions are supposed to be funny, but humor is subjective, after all. How do you critique it?

The first step is simply reporting your experience so the author knows how their work is being received. Did you crack a smile? Chuckle? Laugh out loud? If so, when? Do you know why it worked for you? If not, that's okay. If so, that's even better. Say so! If you didn't find any humor anywhere, say that, too. Maybe you were the only one and it's just a matter of taste, but maybe not, and the author needs to work on their ear for comedy. They need to know.

The next step, I think, is pointing out missteps and missed opportunities. Did you see a gag that almost worked, but didn't? How would you improve it? Did you see an opportunity for a gag that the author didn't take? What was it? I've commented on missed opportunities before, most recently in a review of one of Des' missions. You can, too. It's then up to the author to decide whether or not they agree with you and apply the knowledge to their future work.

All of this, of course, requires you to be an active reader—that is, to notice your own thoughts and feelings as you read rather than just sitting back and passively experiencing the story. Not everyone likes to do this, but I'd point out that being an active reader will make you a better writer, too. Certainly a better PPC writer. Noticing your thoughts and feelings about badfic and being able to tell why you're having them will give you substance for your missions, and may lead to fewer missteps and missed opportunities in your own work. It's a good habit to be in. {= )

~Neshomeh

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