Thank You and Goodnight

Unfortunately for them, aside from a desk and a chair, there wasn’t much in the way the way of concealment.
Repetition.

Once the Time Lord was flat against the the wall behind Itami, the cyborg tapped his eyeglasses, then glanced above their rim.
Repetition.

“Aha!” he after a moment.
Missing word?

The way it ended, with him sitting on her belly and holding her hands down, made him him blush and look at anything but her.
Repetition.

TYH: Youthful Indiscretion

... when the effect Fate’s gaze became ...
I’m not sure whether a word may be missing there.

I used to glance over the the edge of my eyeglasses
Repetition.

I remember an Azerothian troll hitting his head do that.
Missing word "to"?

trying to look unassuming as possible
Missing word: another "as"?

as she kneeled to look the creature more closely
Missing word "at"?

Which, by Fate’s own admission, shouldn’t have been able to.
Missing word "she"?

He took a sooty-looking CAD out of another pocket and put on the table near the H-CAD
Missing word "it"?

I Thought He Was With You

The Librarian just made a ambivalent sound and leaned back.
"a" should be "an".

HG

And now Des is free from that cyber-samurai armor!
And more daily life too!

Tera, welcome to the world of Deadpan Snarking, the one true power in the universe.

Lib's name is... Pretty sure you had a blast writing this.

Grunt, you're getting this Time Lord bad vibe. You're aware it makes you sound like the Notary, right?

Zeb and Librarian, uh. Well, he does try to advance this ship on both ends. (Not sure if he ever discovered that Rinarin was his trainer back then... How would he react?) Meanwile, another ship cruises peacefully.

For the missions, they're an agreable read. I cannot comment too much on the first one since I don't know this canon, but I liked it.

The second one too. It's... reassuring to know that C-CAD will always blow up. Stability in little things of life. This, and behind-the-back recruitement of former agents' child. Now, how could we grill them all for te rest of the Blank Sprite story...

(I can't think of anything more substantial to say other than that I liked these.)

I'm glad to see someone taking on a more obscure (as far as missions go) genre of fanfic. I liked the little ways the agents created trouble just by being themselves, such as Des insisting that a scene break was coming any minute now, really; him having to figure out his new eyes; and the Librarian almost losing an eye to a teenager by being slow.

I'm also both pleased and slightly miffed to see the See-Through Device in action: pleased because I love it when people remember things and bring them back, but miffed because I was gonna do it and you ninja'd me. ^_~ It's okay, though; my use of it probably won't appear for a good long while yet anyway, the way my writing is going.

My only critique is that, in my estimation, you missed an opportunity for a good gag with the line "He turned around to leave, but found that his boots refused to budge." I figure either he's twisted his body around impossibly or else he's stepped out of his boots and left them glued to the doorstep; either way, it would've been funny. {= )

Aaand I am out of time to write more. Will hopefully read more later.

~Neshomeh