Subject: Seventy-five already! Should I get the cakefetti?
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Posted on: 2016-10-26 10:10:00 UTC
I’m fond of the short form. If there isn’t much to say, there’s no need to drag it out. Also it’s good to get an occasional reminder that not all OC’s need to be killed.
Ix and Charlotte’s mutual affection feels more balanced in this and the previous mission than it had been in the last Harry Potter mission. I think you have it right now. (I wonder whether being in her home continuum might have affected Ix negatively.)
And we got a nice cliffhanger. Will Ix be cured permanently, or does Starstuff only work in the Starcatchers universe?
Keep up the good work.
HG, who didn’t find errors, but wanted to comment anyway.