• Lotte being all concerned about Ix is cute
  - Shame about the hair
  - Nice of Charlotte to go get the brace. Shame that's about to get nurfed into the ground
  - re: thirst, Ix's gift for understatement again?
  - Extra comma in “Just so long as you promise to eat some, yourself,”?
  - I like the snuggling scene
  - That was a nice bit of tension, where Ix started going for the human blood
  - I like the description of the disguise shift, though I do want to know how Charlotte pronounced the exclamation mark in 'vampire!me'
  - "I always did tell you you were hot"... . That was a funny line
  - Ix has a lot of good points about the morph there
  - "You have a promising career as a chinrest." was also a funny line
  - "If you die out there, I'll kill you"
  - I like Ix's solution. It seems like the right response to this sort of thing.
  - inb4 the Flowers hassle them about postmortem charging
  - (agent!}Ix, you don't need to apologize for everything. (referring to Ix's reaction to Charlotte's reaction to the execution method)
  - "lept off the sofa like she'd been tasered" is good description
  - The ending is nice, in general
  
  Review, broadly:
  Was good. What I personally liked the best were the Charlotte/Ix relationship parts. The balance between that sort of thing and fic-missioning was reasonable.
  
  Sudden thought: will Charlotte go into an Andalite-style food craze post morph?
  
  - Tomash

It was a fun read, though some of it really made me think: what happens when Charlotte has to realize that she isn't going to be invincible as a human? What happens when she rushes in and gets torn apart and doesn't come back? Because she's got into some seriously bad habits when it comes to Suvian takedown tactics, and it's frankly worrying that Ix hasn't brought her up on it even once.