Subject: And I'm taking the RC #1413 for my agents. (nm)
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Posted on: 2012-10-12 11:40:00 UTC
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Permission Request by
on 2012-10-12 08:49:00 UTC
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Well. Because I finally decided that if I was writing missions I wanted to do them without piggybacking on other people's Permission, here I am.
Agents: Tanya Carter and Magdalen Blackwell reporting for duty.
Permission piece: Whosoever Taketh This Sword..., an original piece.
Badfic for first solo mission: A new world, which I've already staked claim to on the Wiki. -
Congratulations! by
on 2012-10-14 17:02:00 UTC
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I really loved your piece. Like TO said, it takes the "modern girl in a magical land" trope, which is usually badly done and does it well, presenting real problems, like a magic based society being freaked out by flashlights. I love how at the end Val has no idea what just happened; that's pretty much how I would react if I were given a magical sword and made king of a land I wasn't even born in.
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Thanks! (nm) by
on 2012-10-15 06:15:00 UTC
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:D by
on 2012-10-13 21:34:00 UTC
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Aside from what Nesh said about the beginning being a bit too in medias res, yeah. I liked it, especially the end.
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Re: :D by
on 2012-10-13 23:52:00 UTC
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The in medias res wasn't too terribly confusing, I hope! ^_^ It's just how the story came to me: Ellie thumping a book down on the table and (as it turned out, faking) being irritated and confused about the Sword in the Cup thing, and I continued on from that point. Should I put your name on the list of people who want to read the rest whenever I get around to writing it? :D
And I'm very glad you liked the end; I had way too much fun realizing that Ellie was more than just a nice, mildish-mannered mage, and just exactly what the MacGuffin was for. Izzit a magic sword? Oh, hell yeah. Is it kind of both Caliburn and Excalibur? Myup! Is Val going to get forced into being King? Ellie sure seems to be planning that, the jerk! -
Now matter how many times it has been said, this is awesome. by
on 2012-10-13 20:36:00 UTC
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Everything about this application is incredible, especially the permission piece. I can't even find words to verbalise how deeply I adore this.
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:3 -is praised- (nm) by
on 2012-10-14 02:08:00 UTC
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Good story! by
on 2012-10-13 18:24:00 UTC
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Re: Good story! by
on 2012-10-13 23:39:00 UTC
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Oh Wow. by
on 2012-10-13 17:23:00 UTC
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I love it. I'm a sucker for world-traveling setups, and the part with Val picking up the sword was priceless. (Seriously, the first thing you should not do if you get world-travelled is to start collecting artifacts...)
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Heeheeheee. by
on 2012-10-13 17:43:00 UTC
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Congrats! by
on 2012-10-13 16:35:00 UTC
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Your writing piece was wonderful, especially how you pulled off the "Modern girl in magical land" trope that so many murder. This is something I would want to read more of.
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You want more?! by
on 2012-10-13 17:36:00 UTC
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Dear me, I may have to grant your wish.
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Whoa! by
on 2012-10-13 02:19:00 UTC
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That is a seriously awesome writing sample! Great work, Lielac, and congratulations!
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I'll be over there doing a jig. by
on 2012-10-13 02:57:00 UTC
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Ahahahahaha thanks, VM! "Seriously awesome"? With italics on the "awesome"? Never before have I heard such a wondrous review!
...Well, okay, I'll admit Cassie giving me Permission made me shriek and specific points are always helpful for more ammunition against the brain-weasels, but I needed the bigass grin from reading this. -
*joins in, doing a Highland reel for the heck of it* by
on 2012-10-13 10:42:00 UTC
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Haha, it's great to see you're so happy about getting Permission. I reacted pretty much the same way when I was given it. :P
Seriously though, you're one of the more thoughtful, conscientious new(ish) people I've seen around here with a good flair for writing to top it off, and I like that.
(Also, just to let you know, because I am a Dungeons and Dragons nerd too... brain-weasels I don't know of, but brain moles are definitely a thing. :P ) -
Heh. by
on 2012-10-13 17:21:00 UTC
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Brainweasel is a term a friend of mine came up with to discuss the irritating parts of a brain - the ones you know aren't true, but they plague you all the same? Much like a jerkbrain, but shrill and insidious. The ones that go "Stop inflicting your loathsome presence on innocent people," "If you didn't do it perfect the first time it doesn't count," and "Nobody likes you."
So, y' know, shrill insidious things with sharp teeth that still don't make much sense - brainweasels! It makes for a decent image when you're trying to remind yourself they're not true. -
-spins like a top- by
on 2012-10-13 13:16:00 UTC
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Great! by
on 2012-10-12 23:39:00 UTC
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"Whoever Taketh This Sword..." was quite good... I want to see more of it. And by 'it', I mean both the story and your writing.
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:D Thanks! by
on 2012-10-12 23:46:00 UTC
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I'm definitely planning to write more in the Whosoever-verse or whatever I end up calling it, and I have missions both in the process of being written and planned due to claiming terrible, terrible badfic...
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Fantastic! by
on 2012-10-12 22:24:00 UTC
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I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work.
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Thankee, and same to you! :D (nm) by
on 2012-10-12 22:25:00 UTC
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Congratualations, you organised writer you (nm) by
on 2012-10-12 21:13:00 UTC
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Organised writer? -eyebrow- And what does that mean? :P (nm) by
on 2012-10-12 21:13:00 UTC
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One who can actually finish a piece of writing. (nm) by
on 2012-10-13 11:15:00 UTC
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Aah. This was a special occasion. (nm) by
on 2012-10-13 13:02:00 UTC
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Congrats! by
on 2012-10-12 17:44:00 UTC
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I look forward to reading your missions.
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Thanks! :D (nm) by
on 2012-10-12 20:52:00 UTC
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I told you so :3 by
on 2012-10-12 16:20:00 UTC
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Great job, Li! Congratulations!
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Yes, you did. by
on 2012-10-12 20:51:00 UTC
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Lemme just burst your eardrums:
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
There, your ears should be bleeding now. :D -
-stumbles about- Owwie..... by
on 2012-10-12 22:10:00 UTC
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Mike wants to know if Tanya broke her kuudere self long enough to hug you.
But yeah, congrats. I knew you could do it. And just remember - John Cleese has it right: If you're rubbish at something, you lack the skills necessary to realize you are. Thus, if you can actually criticize yourself, odds are you're not at all bad at it. -
Tanya is not a -- Huh. She is. by
on 2012-10-12 22:36:00 UTC
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Tanya wants to know if Mike will be available for being the... um... -counts- Eh. Let's say 'first PPC person met after the Sod tells her whose partner she is and that she's assigned to RC #1413', I'm still working out the shenanigans with the cactus and the plothole. (I am certainly, certainly not thinking of immediate flirting on Mike's part.
Somebody help me, I'm turning into a ship-obsessed fangirl!) Mags called dibs on the second PPCer she meets being Kilroy, the first being the Intel agent who read the fic Sasha showed up in.
Yes, Riese, I beat myself up too much. Thanks for being so patient with me, and for finding a quote I hadn't heard yet. :P -
Sounds like a plan. by
on 2012-10-13 00:13:00 UTC
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Of course she is. You know how Mike is. I won't promise she won't be a little flirty, though (she is, after all, French).
And of course I put up with you. It's only fair, what with the way you put up with me. -
Wheeeee! by
on 2012-10-13 00:18:00 UTC
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Muaha by
on 2012-10-13 00:28:00 UTC
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How did I forget that again?
Very carefully, it would seem.
...before I hit you with a stick.
So violent and fierce, Saber!~ I can see where Maggie gets if from.~ -
Bwahaha! by
on 2012-10-13 00:32:00 UTC
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-whacks you with the Tora-Shinai- by
on 2012-10-13 00:43:00 UTC
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Behave, you! Lay off Lancer, he's suffered enough. You can go maul Kotomine, though~
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-cowers- by
on 2012-10-13 00:45:00 UTC
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But... but Rieeeese! He's so tasty!
I think I'll do that, though. OH KOTOMINE, MY CLAWS WANNA MEET YOUR FAAAAACE~ -
-gets the popcorn- by
on 2012-10-13 00:49:00 UTC
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Mike's bugging me - she's taking photos, and says she's nearly out of film.
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-Maggie steals the popcorn- by
on 2012-10-13 00:57:00 UTC
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Raaaaaaaaaaar! -manglemanglemangle- That's for being a smug sonnuva Doom Viper! That's for being condescending! That is for really, really annoying me!
Tanya is raising an eyebrow at Mike still using a camera that uses film, and handing over a digital camera. -
-watches interestedly- by
on 2012-10-13 01:10:00 UTC
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Wow, I didn't know it was possible to actually tie a bow in somebody's spine. Seems I've underestimated you. Mike says thank you for the camera, and promises to use it only for good. Well, mostly. She didn't say what she meant, but I heard a lot of giggling...
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Re: -watches interestedly- by
on 2012-10-13 01:13:00 UTC
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Yes, I am awesome.
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My uterus has also informed me that it hates me, so I'll be over there wishing for a spontaneous hysterectomy. uuuuuuuugh -
-pats- (nm) by
on 2012-10-13 01:21:00 UTC
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*it from. Damn you, iPhone keyboard! (nm) by
on 2012-10-13 00:29:00 UTC
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/has been feeling that pain all week (nm) by
on 2012-10-13 01:03:00 UTC
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Blaaaargh by
on 2012-10-13 06:54:00 UTC
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Teal deer? by
on 2012-10-14 03:22:00 UTC
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Oh dear, now you're hallucinating. Never a good sign...
I has interlude I would like to publish, but I'm making myself wait until I know whether or not I have full Internet access back on my computer before I post it.
And today was the last day of Brewfest. All of my grrs. -
Teal deer = tl;dr = Riese's saying he was rambling. :P (nm) by
on 2012-10-14 03:28:00 UTC
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Indeedy-deed by
on 2012-10-14 04:38:00 UTC
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Yup. Me and rambling go together like Mi...nah. Don't want to run that into the ground. Or run it Aground, more accurately.
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Re: Indeedy-deed by
on 2012-10-14 04:46:00 UTC
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I've given up on evicting you, love. It doesn't seem to work by
on 2012-10-14 05:38:00 UTC
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:3 That's 'cause your brain is comfy. by
on 2012-10-14 05:45:00 UTC
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Thank you...I think? by
on 2012-10-14 05:56:00 UTC
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Mmm. Everyone dying in flames isn't exactly out of the question, if you take my meaning.~
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Oh, and I found something terribly punny. by
on 2012-10-14 09:21:00 UTC
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Pffthahaha by
on 2012-10-14 16:55:00 UTC
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Gods, yes. And I guarantee there's enough F/SN badfic.
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Eggscellent. (nm) by
on 2012-10-15 00:28:00 UTC
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Definitely a compliment. by
on 2012-10-14 06:06:00 UTC
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Totally good with that by
on 2012-10-14 16:49:00 UTC
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Also, I'm trying to figure out which other Servant(s) we want to take on directly. We can't do it all, that's unrealistic.
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Furthermore: WOO I HAVE INTERNET! (nm) by
on 2012-10-14 18:53:00 UTC
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-mocks goodnaturedly- (nm) by
on 2012-10-13 00:35:00 UTC
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Pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt! (nm) by
on 2012-10-13 00:44:00 UTC
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Congratulations! by
on 2012-10-12 13:14:00 UTC
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I really liked Whosoever Taketh This Sword. I want to read more of that now.
And I quite liked Hell Sings. I can't wait to see more of your missions.
By the way, have a celebratory geode! -
One thing, though. by
on 2012-10-12 20:40:00 UTC
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Excalibur isn't the sword in the stone. Excalibur was given to Arthur by the Lady of the Lake, and I'm not sure what the sword in the stone is called.
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... Didn't know that. by
on 2012-10-13 15:22:00 UTC
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Must go recheck my knowledge of the Arthurian myth.
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Oh, well, thaaat... by
on 2012-10-12 20:49:00 UTC
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Valerie knows that. “Well, usually people think Excalibur’s the sword King Arthur pulled from the stone to prove he was the rightful king of all of Britain, but--” The Sword in the Stone is Caliburn. I'm using Excalibur here because it's more instantly recognizable and it got tossed in a lake.
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And I'm taking the RC #1413 for my agents. (nm) by
on 2012-10-12 11:40:00 UTC
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*takes a look* by
on 2012-10-12 10:01:00 UTC
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And I quote the IRC: 05:01 Lielac parties by
on 2012-10-12 10:14:00 UTC
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@ppc.hq? @ppc.int(erdimensional)? by
on 2012-10-12 10:58:00 UTC
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Or, knowing the sort of people who'd have to have set them up, @ppc.ppc.ppc...
(If anyone's considered it before, I don't think I've heard)
hS
PS: CONGRATULATION. -
Heeh. I like .int . by
on 2012-10-12 11:06:00 UTC
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.nc? by
on 2012-10-12 11:02:00 UTC
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At least for external ones. I'm not sure the PPC would need internal e-mail, since they have console messages and all that.
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Inter-Console Electronic Post by
on 2012-10-12 17:13:00 UTC
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Good luck! by
on 2012-10-12 09:58:00 UTC
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I know from working on 'The Most Stab-Inducing Love' with you and reading 'Hell Sings' that you have two very cool agents. Hopefully they'll get to solo so we can see how their relationship will evolve!
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-points at Cassie- Insert shriek of glee here. (nm) by
on 2012-10-12 10:14:00 UTC
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/shrieks with empathy glee by
on 2012-10-12 11:18:00 UTC
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Come, let us dance the happy dance together!
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/shrieeeeeks by
on 2012-10-12 11:19:00 UTC
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Yes, do let's!
'Cidentally, how much twitching would occur if Maggie called Gilbert "Gilly-Gills"? :D -
Let's celebrate with NMs & NMs! by
on 2012-10-12 11:37:00 UTC
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/takes you by the hands and dances a goofy dance
Weeeeeeeeeee~!
Hee, Gilly-Gins's head might explode. Why do you ask? Do you have something deliciously evil in mind? -
Yaaaay! by
on 2012-10-12 11:38:00 UTC
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/dances wiiiiith
Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
Nothing special, just a possible way she might take his name while playing around with the sound of it. Gil, Gilly-Gil, Gilly-Gilly-Gills. -
/witty response by
on 2012-10-12 11:48:00 UTC
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Hee, Gilly simply makes it too easy - if he didn't flinch like a cat to a spray bottle (oh, how I love that metaphor...simile...thing), it wouldn't be so much fun.
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/wittier one by
on 2012-10-12 11:49:00 UTC
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Simile. Metaphors don't use "like" or "as". And it is fun, it is so very, very fun... :D
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/wittiesterier one by
on 2012-10-12 12:10:00 UTC
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I never could tell the two apart - seems rather silly to have two names for pretty much the same thing based on a one-word difference...
Yesh. He -needs- to bump into Caroline at some point. To discuss physics. And not at all because I enjoy tormenting him. Oh! Caroline and Fiona can gang up on him!
During a debate about the weather, of course. -
/flees before your terrifying powers of gardening by
on 2012-10-12 12:13:00 UTC
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Mhm. It is a bit confusing!
Oh, yesss. And Maggie could help! She's a complete astronomy nerd, they could argue about that. -
/is more disturbed that we both thought 'wisteria' by
on 2012-10-12 12:24:00 UTC
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Oh, we are just the worst kind of people. /cackles
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Uh, actually... by
on 2012-10-12 12:36:00 UTC
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I didn't. I just pulled the first "terrifying powers of" quote my brain offered me. -blames Gunnerkrigg Court-
But yes. Yes, we are. -
/fine, is more disturbed that we both went to plant stuff (nm) by
on 2012-10-12 12:52:00 UTC
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/Right then! (nm) (nm) (nm) by
on 2012-10-12 12:52:00 UTC
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Omnomnomnom. (nm) by
on 2012-10-12 17:53:00 UTC
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