Subject: Re: In the Rainbow Factory, where replacements go to die...
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Posted on: 2012-10-09 19:55:00 UTC
Very nice work. Thank you so much for killing this abomination. :)
Subject: Re: In the Rainbow Factory, where replacements go to die...
Author:
Posted on: 2012-10-09 19:55:00 UTC
Very nice work. Thank you so much for killing this abomination. :)
...and you probably aren't, but Im'ma tell you anyway. As soon as I get my wireless connection back, Im'ma post a copy of the mission on Dreamwidth, which was my initial plan anyway. There'll be a link to the Dreamwidth version on Caroline and Veralyn's pages on the wiki when that happens.
/does not like Google Docs at all.
Reading the mission, it was really well written. I'd say more, but the people who have posted before me have put it in better words. I do believe the interactions between Caroline and Veralyn was one of the things that got my attention. The rather heated bickering between them made them pretty interesting, and real.
All in all, this was a very enjoyable mission to read.
Yesh, those two have a violent love-hate relationship - it'll be fun to see how they handle their first Warcraft mission! XD
Glad you enjoyed the mission!
Very nice work. Thank you so much for killing this abomination. :)
From reading your mission, that badfic really needed destroying - and you did it well. And the agents getting used to pony bodies - absolutely brilliant! Well done!
Yes, the decent grammar and spelling in this one did not excuse what was done to the characters. I'm happy to have been the one to take it down!
Thank you for taking care of this mess! It's bad fanfiction like this one that make me wonder what the hell is wrong with some people!
Also, why was the sacrificial lamb pony named after the author? Is it a sadomasochistic kind of thing?
Eh, whatever... glad this piece of crap was finally taken care of...
The best I can figure is that this was either the first fanfiction they uploaded, so they named their account after their favorite character in out (which is...yeah), or they wrote another story - either on Fimfiction or somewhere else - where Aurora doesn't die so hard, and named their account after that Aurora.
Aurora Dawn raised a few eyebrows, yes. No, we have no idea why she did it. Well. I Don't - Kitty might.
It's always a good thing to have inter-spinoff interactions. Just one thing: I think Aurora Dawn had red in her mane. At the part where her wings give away, the crowd saw a "blur of yellow, green, and red" plummet to the ground.
Thanks again for letting me have her. Now I gotta start working on an introduction piece for Fire Flash and Taldaris...
By the way, what are you planning to do with Orion?
Agent Caroline, that is, not...you know what I mean. XD
Nope - the author has a picture of Aurora as his/her icon on Fimfiction. No red in her mane that I can see - although her wings ARE bandaged in the icon and the story, so maybe that red was blood from her wings getting messed up? -shudders-
I'm not sure what I'll do with Orion yet; if ye have a good idea for him, you're welcome to have him, too. I'd probably just make him an All-Purpose agent, which feels horribly unoriginal.
Because they enjoy murdering cute, innocent things with violence, sexual themes, and kid-unfriendly insanity? -shrugs-
I have too, but none of them are ever mentioned to have cutie marks and at least one - Scootaloo - is called a foal to her face, so I'm not sure. I'd say maybe the MLP equivalent of young teenagers??
So my phone hates the wiki. To the point that I can't link the story anywhere. Or edit anything in general.
-sobs-