...and you probably aren't, but Im'ma tell you anyway. As soon as I get my wireless connection back, Im'ma post a copy of the mission on Dreamwidth, which was my initial plan anyway. There'll be a link to the Dreamwidth version on Caroline and Veralyn's pages on the wiki when that happens.

/does not like Google Docs at all.

Reading the mission, it was really well written. I'd say more, but the people who have posted before me have put it in better words. I do believe the interactions between Caroline and Veralyn was one of the things that got my attention. The rather heated bickering between them made them pretty interesting, and real.

All in all, this was a very enjoyable mission to read.

Very nice work. Thank you so much for killing this abomination. :)

From reading your mission, that badfic really needed destroying - and you did it well. And the agents getting used to pony bodies - absolutely brilliant! Well done!

Finally! This has been a long time coming, and it's a great mission. Here are my thoughts on the mission, in no order.

One thing: I thought the disguise thingy automatically fixes it so that Agents can pick up things like walking or flying really quickly--one of my agents, Tera, was able to adjust to missing 3 of her eyes and a tail thanks to that.

Oh well, it's an entertaining sequence.

Interesting--I think another agent, I forget who, was supposed to die in their home fic. But since they didn't they had ridiculous bad luck all the time.

The Ritual of Activation of Ancient And Possibly Cantankerous Machine-Spirits was quite funny.

Hm... Honestly, I'm not sure if the violent deaths of the Proctors, Caroline ripping off Replacement Dash's wings, and death by grinder violate the laws on torture.

Wait, Caroline was missing her cutie mark? I didn't know that.

All in all, this was a good mission. Nice job.

Thank you for taking care of this mess! It's bad fanfiction like this one that make me wonder what the hell is wrong with some people!

Also, why was the sacrificial lamb pony named after the author? Is it a sadomasochistic kind of thing?

Eh, whatever... glad this piece of crap was finally taken care of...

No, seriously, it is.

There are so many things I love about this mission: Caroline's stand against Veralyn's attitude, rescuing Aurora Dawn and Orion, Kilroy and his 40k-related vocabulary, and the purging of the Factory. You've even managed to integrate humour into this piece, a remarkable achievement for a fic so dark.

You've even picked up on some charges Gaspard missed out on during his Intel run. Looking back on it, I can't believe I've managed to miss those...

In my opinion, the only thing that weighed this mission down was the more-violent-than-usual assassination.

You did a wonderful job with this. Have some Seasons of War, performed by the London Philharmonic Orchestra.

One last thing: if it's all right with you and if she's up for adoption, may I please have Aurora Dawn? I promise to take good care of her!

So my phone hates the wiki. To the point that I can't link the story anywhere. Or edit anything in general.

-sobs-