Subject: Still catching up
Author:
Posted on: 2019-07-04 12:23:00 UTC

Then the stakes got so big that the driving arcs were about which character they were going to resurrect this season.
Wouldn’t you usually say "so high"?

I’d smite you as soon as look at you if it weren’t for the fact we’re stuck together.
Not sure about this, but I feel like a word may be missing there?

Suddenly, Faust’s eyes went wide, and he began to head for darkened corner out of view of the front walkway, nudging the angel to follow.
Shouldn’t this be "for a darkened corner"?

You’d scarce give her the credit
Shouldn’t this be "scarcely" (adverb)?

The Sue announced that she accepted Sam’s offer to work with her before demanding he stop his drinking.
Shouldn’t this be "stopped"? (I don’t know the correct term, but I think the grammatical form is some sort of conditional or expectation. I may also have seen "demanding him to stop". )

So… since that wouldn’t be in my best interests to lie to you?
Again I’m not sure whether a word may be missing here?

HG

Reply Return to messages