Subject: The canonical versions...
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Posted on: 2019-07-23 12:44:00 UTC

... fit very neatly into a standard structure. There are eight parts, varying in length from 'and ease pain' to '—looking always toward the Heart of Time, where all our sundered times are one, and all our myriad worlds lie whole, in the One from Whom they proceeded…' (which as a dedication is directly synonymous with 'till Universe's end' or 'later it all works out, honest'; it's just a bit more long-winded).

The Activist's Recension falls pretty well into the same setup, though it doesn't mention pain (though you could just merge 'guard growth, ease pain' into a single section); it also intersperses the checks-and-balances section throughout the Oath. In general, people seem to be following Diane closely enough, and the sections I've drawn out are broad enough, that you could pull it off.

I think what you'd end up with is some form of 3-point scale for each section: how wordy should it be? 'I will guard growth and ease pain' is very concise, so would be a 1; the 'Heart of Time' dedication is probably a 3. Throw in a ranking of which pieces are most important, write enough variants, and you've got a generator.

Then all you need is some quiz that will pluck the relevant numbers from your mind... that's the tricky part.

hS

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