(I couldn't get to this earlier because deadlines)

• One line I'm slightly confused by was "How was the mission report?" I think I can sort of tell what's meant there but I'm not sure.
• It's nice to see the mention that things are improving.
• Caps issue in: “What the hell?” She asked faintly
• The clipping and other visual issues are a nice touch
• Reality room, nice touch for dealing with superpowered folks
• Ok, now I get the line about the report. You might've wanted "How's the mission report going?"

Overall, this is a nice short mission that does a good job of showing off the issues in this fic. It still manages to have some nice character interactions, though it's hard to fit in a bunch of those into a short work like this.

... I don't tend to read many fics that abuse punctuation that badly. My eyes just glaze over.

I know about a hundred other people have said this already, but good work on characters T-posing to assert dominance over the canon. I also appreciated the use of a Reality Room to finish the mission; "then Liz stabbed them some more" is a really funny line, considering how short the mission (and the fic) were.

One thing I would nitpick about is the dialogue; a few times, I had trouble keeping track of who was speaking. A lot of that is probably just because it's a new spinoff with new characters,so I'm not used to how they talk yet. However, I would have liked to see Avery and Liz physically doing a little more while they're commenting on the fic.

You, uh. You sure discovered a series of words inside that story, yep. Wow.

I didn't really comment on it in the earlier Miraculous Ladybug mission, but I like that pretty font you use to show how the adverse Akumas display their names. I love how their color schemes emulate the characters they're named for (I assume). Feels like somebody should draw some—but not me. Someone who can draw well and reasonable quickly.

I like your use of bad CGI graphics and treating the characters as game models as concrete ways of showing how the spelling and sentence structure were warping the World. I also enjoyed the hilariously simple way Avery tricked the Sues into walking through a portal.

—doctorlit has no typo list for this one

I like that the badfic is described like it's using bad CGI.

I really enjoyed the mission! The glitchiness is a fun take on bad SPaG, and the execution made me chuckle. A perfect mix of satisfying and humorous.