Subject: Thoughts on the interludes
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Posted on: 2020-02-15 06:28:38 UTC

It took me a second reading to work out what was going on with the epithets, but overall I like "Clearing the Air". The A/N an the end is on point. I'm interesting in seeing how this shows up in character development going forward.

As to "Homesick", it's a nice slice of life. Ideally, I'd like to see it continued to Eleanor's story, but it works fine as it. (Also, I think you've got a "minx" where you wanted "mini" in there)

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