Subject: Congratulations!
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Posted on: 2012-09-26 09:17:00 UTC

Nice job on getting Permission! I really like that sorta-hostile-but-not-quite dynamic between your two agents. I have a feeling that it will lead to some very interesting interactions... I will definitely be keeping an eye on these two.

As for the piece itself, I think the PGs and Sevenswans have already pointed out the few things that can be improved. Keep up the good work!



P.S: About the Rainbow Factory... Have you ever listened to the original song by WoodenToaster? As much as I hate the fic, the song itself is actually pretty catchy.

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