I know nothing of Bionicle

Mission Report by Riese on 2012-09-22 19:11:00 UTC Reply

It's finally finished! Here it is, in all of its 13,000-plus word glory! PLEASEpleasepleaseplease concrit.

/gets on knees and begs

This Mission is slightly NSFW, violence and language-wise. The original fic is quite NSFW, but for very different reasons.

Part 1: https://docs.google.com/document/d/13MtzIN2frTPPjdEMGTlXiZ4bAiMDHziD6Lv86r8Zk4w/edit

Part 2: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LsErzHsbObNJl6czDKmNRCIIOSggkQikdBQounAR8uk/edit

Original Fic (NSFW):http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1606924/1/The-Greatest-Love

Credit where it's due: Thanks to LilacLielac for finding the fic and leading us in writing the mission, to KittyNoodles for putting her Agents (and sanity) in the line of fire alongside ours, to Crimson Flight for Beta-ing Part 1 and participating in Part 2, and to StarAlbatross for Beta-ing both.

Added the mission to the front page of the wiki. by KittyNoodles on 2012-09-23 05:15:00 UTC Reply

Am looking to see where else it needs to be added (Riese, can you link both parts on your agents' pages?)

...Aaand done. by Riese on 2012-09-23 07:05:00 UTC Reply

By the way, you need to go ahead and make Agent pages. You too, Lilac. And Crimson, as well.

You sure? by KittyNoodles on 2012-09-23 08:27:00 UTC Reply

I thought only people with Permission could create agent pages - co-writes or not. That's why I've been holding off.

Urrum. by Huinesoron on 2012-09-23 09:21:00 UTC Reply

I'd say since they've appeared in a PPC-canon piece, they're now part of PPC canon whether you're allowed to use them by themselves or not. So they need pages.

hS

On the subject of Mike... by KittyNoodles on 2012-09-23 04:57:00 UTC Reply

Gilbert is still terribly scarred. Terribly. He suffers nightmares due to what happened.

-snerk- by Riese on 2012-09-23 06:55:00 UTC Reply

I don't see why. Her Noble Phantasm isn't particularly horrifying or anything...or were you referring to the...creative...way she dealt with their uncanonical bits?

Re: -snerk- by KittyNoodles on 2012-09-23 08:28:00 UTC Reply

I was referring to the neuter-by-flaming-sword that Gilbert watched, yes.

Gilbert would like to disagree with you. by KittyNoodles on 2012-09-23 02:34:00 UTC Reply

According to him, the very idea that he is female is what was so bad about it. He's rather fond of his gender.

...That sounded better in my head...

Is sense-making at least! by Lilac Lielac on 2012-09-24 21:20:00 UTC Reply

If to be considered very silly by Maggie and Tanya, because while they're comfortable with the culture-default gender that comes with their XX chromosomes, they're also completely blasé about changing it for mission purposes. Also, one of the two just made a 'you and your quaint little categories' comment in an eerily accurate imitation of Jack Harkness. I think it was Tanya.

Very sense-making. by KittyNoodles on 2012-09-24 23:27:00 UTC Reply

Gilbert is still recovering from a nasty headache - have you ever seen a dragon-egg? It's like a goose-egg, but bigger and dark purple.

Fiona is cackling at the categories quote.
Have you been listening to the voices in your head again? (nm) by Riese on 2012-09-24 21:45:00 UTC Reply

Nitpickiness by desdendelle on 2012-09-22 22:48:00 UTC Reply

You left the betas' comments in the piece. This is slightly not aesthetic.

I think I've managed to publish Part One. by KittyNoodles on 2012-09-23 18:18:00 UTC Reply

https://docs.google.com/document/pub?id=13MtzIN2frTPPjdEMGTlXiZ4bAiMDHziD6Lv86r8Zk4w

New Version of Part 2 by Crimson Flight on 2012-09-23 11:14:00 UTC Reply

https://docs.google.com/document/pub?id=1LsErzHsbObNJl6czDKmNRCIIOSggkQikdBQounAR8uk

I took the liberty of publishing the second part to the web for the others. Only the second part, because I wasn't in Part 1.

It's Over! by KittyNoodles on 2012-09-22 21:14:00 UTC Reply

Aaaaaaaaugh I'm not doing another mission until I ask for Permission. Six chapters should be short, not two-part worthy! Owie...
... by desdendelle on 2012-09-22 21:13:00 UTC Reply

This is that BIONICLE slash!rape!fic, right? My morbid curiosity demands that I read this.

That's the one! by Riese on 2012-09-22 21:24:00 UTC Reply

We left the NSFW bits out of the mission (they happened off-screen, as it were), so it shouldn't be too bad...
Take all the Bleepka you can get a hold of when you do. (nm) by KittyNoodles on 2012-09-22 21:15:00 UTC Reply