Subject: Alrighty
Posted on: 2020-06-15 19:03:25 UTC

Didn't catch most of the typos actually, so thanks!

Also, I didn't think too hard about the vomit thing, but yeah, changed it to feel a bit more natural, I hope.

I decided to cut out the slurred part, seeing as it didn't have much importance to the mission at all and one of my betas suggested cropping things down anyway.

Glad you liked it, though!

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