Subject: Hmm.
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Posted on: 2020-12-18 15:16:43 UTC
Well, if the main POV is one of the larger, all-caps varieties and very sparkly, maybe misspelling it downgrades it to a lowercase pov, also very sparkly? That would be your "bit of both," I think?
I'm just entranced by a couple of lines in chapter 4, though. I mean, first, ????'s P.O.V. Poor critter must be so confused! But then:
> As i looked, I saw something that cut my eye.
Oh, no. Oh, dear. Poor ???? (whose identity is totally not given away by the title of the chapter or anything).
And:
> "Lady Ella, Lord Elrond expects your presents at once,"
Jeez! Demanding bugger, this Lord Elrond! {X D
This is a fun one. Looking forward to the mission! ^_^
~Neshomeh