Re: mission by
doctorlit
on 2021-02-28 21:32:45 UTC
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Hey, I'm sorry I've taken so long to respond to you current set of missions. I got a new hand-me-down computer from a friend, but I had much confusion in getting it to connect properly to my old monitors. I'm hoping to catch up on all the missions this weekend!
Anyway, I quite enjoyed this mission! Not only were Melissa and May very funny, but I was especially amused by your "narration voice." You used it to great effect to comment on the absurdity of the reality warping that both agents felt equally. My favorite was the narration's admission that the rocks were justified in whimpering, despite the facts that they shouldn't have been. Oh, and the apples making people slip in midair!
I also like how you portrayed Danielle as being blissfully unaware of the weirdness around her, and ultimately not particularly hostile to the Word World at all. It works really well for this story, especially in light of bringing her to FicPsych at the end. You're becoming quite the "pacifist playthrough" person with these Suefics! (Which I like.)
—doctorlit, with a big bottle of catch-up
Great betaing for you! by
Cicada
on 2021-02-21 12:15:11 UTC
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It's always nice to slide back into the adventures of Melissa and May, and see what sort of absurdity you've found. You really do have a talent for locating the strangest stuff. Hope I can continue betaing and reading with you. :)
I laughed while working out because of the Facebook thing. by
Kittyauthor
on 2021-02-20 01:50:53 UTC
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looks at nearly finished mission of my own
sweeps it under the rug (that randomly appeared) while whistling
rug begins to whistle
Ugh, never mind.
Anyways, I laughed out loud at several points in the fic. I absolutely loved it.
Semi-OT, just a quick note for all re. the Discord blacklist. by
Neshomeh
on 2021-02-19 18:15:32 UTC
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Not everyone in the PPC community frequents the Discord. If you choose to use warnings on your missions or your posts, please make sure they're clear for everyone, not just habitual Discord users. Thanks. {= )
~Neshomeh