Subject: That was good;
Posted on: 2022-01-02 17:31:53 UTC

I don't think I'll leave a particularly long review because I'm on mobil, but

  1. Y'all did a fantastic job making everyone's feelings vivid and detailed when needed, especially during the first pile of kisses etc, without being purple about it.

  2. The bit near the end about the singing was touching and then funny

  3. Even though this is mainly a romance, it was still noticably a PPC work (the thing with the vampire, for example, just felt very HQ)

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