Subject: Re: part 2
Posted on: 2022-01-04 04:03:08 UTC

Boy, all that talk about the hair and clothing at the beginning makes me glad to be ace/aro! I am not very self aware appearance-wise, and i would hate to start worrying about all that stuff. As usual, not a whole lot I feel I can say about the romance elements, although I have to say: the one line ". . . enough to convince Jenni he was worth not waiting for" is solid gold, a great and expressive variation on the common "worth waiting for." That's probably the phrase that made me understand Jenni's headspace the most.

I also liked the "Time Warp" sequence, with them settling on a . . . shall we say, "not vocally athletic" song to avoid Jenni's glitter getting too prominent. It was a cute moment together! Shame it worked so well so quickly. At least it got the single line of "You're So Vain" that I know to stop replaying in my head over and over.

—doctorlit makes his first Board post with his new Christmas keyboard

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