Subject: Just a heads-up,
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Posted on: 2022-02-08 17:57:25 UTC
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Mission #4 is finally finished! (content warning for some body horror, destructive fire, and cow tf kink, amongst other things)
In which two idiots suffer at the hands of a Pokémon fic involving a Suvian, cows, and general badfic shenaniganery.
Funnily enough, I'm at four missions now and I still have yet to record a mini! Dunno if that makes me lucky or not, but it felt worth mentioning. Anyways, hope you enjoy!
-OrangeFox
I think the mission length was just right and I like that the agents had to suffer from the aftermath.
-Ozzielot
I like your take on the generic, undescribed room, with the infinity walls and the slightly squishy surfaces. I also enjoyed how you gave Victoria extra screen time, and let her become more than just a background character while she was hanging out on the sidelines.
That was an unusually satisfying assassination. I kind of go back and forth on how much assassination should be used in missions, but when the Suvian is flagrantly making themselves the antagonist in their own fic . . . yeah, makes it an easy decision.
—doctorlit was having milk with cereal the whole time he read this, and he didn't even flinch once
Glad you liked the descriptions and such - it's been something I've found lacking in my writings recently, so it's nice to know there's some improvement happening. And yeah, the Suvian was definitely a Thing. Dunno why he was made as nasty as he was, actually, but it made the missioning of this a whole lot easier. (and no flinching? nerves of steel, man. nerves of steel. kudos!)
Anyway, thanks again!
-OrangeFox
The agent reqctiins here, and especially the puns, we're fun to read.
The ending was very PPC.
As to the fic itself, I don't actually know Pokemon, so I'm going to assume there was enough here on a breaking canon level and on a technical level that this isn't a case of YKINMK spawning a mission - though I'll note that while I'm usually on team "just use OCs/file off the serial numbers if you're gonna write some prbbably-OOC kink", Pokemon transformation is it's own rather established thing so ... "this probably could've been done well" is my reaction to the fic.
Glad you liked the agent interactions! (and the puns that had, like, zero thought intentionally put into them)
For the fic proper, though? Yeah, I very much would like to clarify this isn't a YKINMK-based mission. While the more kink-based content is definitely easy to make the unprepared suffer with (mostly Jiwon in this case, 'cuz he's kind of a prude), the reason this fic got chosen for a spork was because of 1: A complete lack of consent to the transformation or ensuing (very canon-breaking) sexualization, and 2: A nearly comically smug Suvian that was practically begging for a poetic takedown. Just wanted to clear that up, sorry.
-OrangeFox
Goodness, what a fic you found. I absolutely love how Charlie's deadpan behavior bounces off poor Jiwon's torment. And the joke at the end with the RC was just an awesome moment. I really enjoy your sense of humor.
I thought the scene with the milk was particularly memorable.
None of the gdocs links found on these agents' wiki pages are accessible; when I open them, they return this error message: "Sorry, unable to open the file at this time. Please check the address and try again."
Not sure what happened, there, actually? Ah well, I'll have to republish or something, I guess. Thanks for the heads-up!