Subject: Nice! I like it.
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Posted on: 2022-02-08 18:01:47 UTC
I thought the scene with the milk was particularly memorable.
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New Mission! by
on 2022-02-08 16:24:26 UTC
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Mission #4 is finally finished! (content warning for some body horror, destructive fire, and cow tf kink, amongst other things)
In which two idiots suffer at the hands of a Pokémon fic involving a Suvian, cows, and general badfic shenaniganery.
Funnily enough, I'm at four missions now and I still have yet to record a mini! Dunno if that makes me lucky or not, but it felt worth mentioning. Anyways, hope you enjoy!
-OrangeFox
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That was a pretty amusing mission! by
on 2022-02-12 03:37:51 UTC
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I think the mission length was just right and I like that the agents had to suffer from the aftermath.
-Ozzielot
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re: mission by
on 2022-02-11 13:59:49 UTC
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I like your take on the generic, undescribed room, with the infinity walls and the slightly squishy surfaces. I also enjoyed how you gave Victoria extra screen time, and let her become more than just a background character while she was hanging out on the sidelines.
That was an unusually satisfying assassination. I kind of go back and forth on how much assassination should be used in missions, but when the Suvian is flagrantly making themselves the antagonist in their own fic . . . yeah, makes it an easy decision.
—doctorlit was having milk with cereal the whole time he read this, and he didn't even flinch once
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Thanks! by
on 2022-02-12 02:03:49 UTC
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Glad you liked the descriptions and such - it's been something I've found lacking in my writings recently, so it's nice to know there's some improvement happening. And yeah, the Suvian was definitely a Thing. Dunno why he was made as nasty as he was, actually, but it made the missioning of this a whole lot easier. (and no flinching? nerves of steel, man. nerves of steel. kudos!)
Anyway, thanks again!
-OrangeFox
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Thoughts by
on 2022-02-09 17:47:48 UTC
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The agent reqctiins here, and especially the puns, we're fun to read.
The ending was very PPC.
As to the fic itself, I don't actually know Pokemon, so I'm going to assume there was enough here on a breaking canon level and on a technical level that this isn't a case of YKINMK spawning a mission - though I'll note that while I'm usually on team "just use OCs/file off the serial numbers if you're gonna write some prbbably-OOC kink", Pokemon transformation is it's own rather established thing so ... "this probably could've been done well" is my reaction to the fic.
- Tomash, on mobile
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Eek, sorry for the late reply by
on 2022-02-12 01:54:00 UTC
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Glad you liked the agent interactions! (and the puns that had, like, zero thought intentionally put into them)
For the fic proper, though? Yeah, I very much would like to clarify this isn't a YKINMK-based mission. While the more kink-based content is definitely easy to make the unprepared suffer with (mostly Jiwon in this case, 'cuz he's kind of a prude), the reason this fic got chosen for a spork was because of 1: A complete lack of consent to the transformation or ensuing (very canon-breaking) sexualization, and 2: A nearly comically smug Suvian that was practically begging for a poetic takedown. Just wanted to clear that up, sorry.
-OrangeFox
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Holy cheeseballs, that was crazy. (nm) by
on 2022-02-08 23:49:37 UTC
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That was a trip. Wow. by
on 2022-02-08 18:02:03 UTC
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Goodness, what a fic you found. I absolutely love how Charlie's deadpan behavior bounces off poor Jiwon's torment. And the joke at the end with the RC was just an awesome moment. I really enjoy your sense of humor.
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Nice! I like it. by
on 2022-02-08 18:01:47 UTC
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I thought the scene with the milk was particularly memorable.
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Just a heads-up, by
on 2022-02-08 17:57:25 UTC
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None of the gdocs links found on these agents' wiki pages are accessible; when I open them, they return this error message: "Sorry, unable to open the file at this time. Please check the address and try again."
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...Huh. by
on 2022-02-08 18:21:50 UTC
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Not sure what happened, there, actually? Ah well, I'll have to republish or something, I guess. Thanks for the heads-up!
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The link for their PvZ mission on the Killed Badfic list still works, strangely (nm) by
on 2022-02-08 18:23:36 UTC
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