I think the mission length was just right and I like that the agents had to suffer from the aftermath.

-Ozzielot

I like your take on the generic, undescribed room, with the infinity walls and the slightly squishy surfaces. I also enjoyed how you gave Victoria extra screen time, and let her become more than just a background character while she was hanging out on the sidelines.

That was an unusually satisfying assassination. I kind of go back and forth on how much assassination should be used in missions, but when the Suvian is flagrantly making themselves the antagonist in their own fic . . . yeah, makes it an easy decision.

—doctorlit was having milk with cereal the whole time he read this, and he didn't even flinch once

The agent reqctiins here, and especially the puns, we're fun to read.

The ending was very PPC.

As to the fic itself, I don't actually know Pokemon, so I'm going to assume there was enough here on a breaking canon level and on a technical level that this isn't a case of YKINMK spawning a mission - though I'll note that while I'm usually on team "just use OCs/file off the serial numbers if you're gonna write some prbbably-OOC kink", Pokemon transformation is it's own rather established thing so ... "this probably could've been done well" is my reaction to the fic.

• Tomash, on mobile

Goodness, what a fic you found. I absolutely love how Charlie's deadpan behavior bounces off poor Jiwon's torment. And the joke at the end with the RC was just an awesome moment. I really enjoy your sense of humor.

I thought the scene with the milk was particularly memorable.

None of the gdocs links found on these agents' wiki pages are accessible; when I open them, they return this error message: "Sorry, unable to open the file at this time. Please check the address and try again."