Subject: Whee!
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Posted on: 2022-03-01 16:17:22 UTC
Okay, so, mostly this is awesome and I wish I had more time to read All Things Kaitlyn now. ^_^ Since I don't, some notes:
- Punctuation goes before ref tags. There are some spots you've got some after a tag.
- Typo: "She sent to live in their Response Centre" should be "went" (or possibly "was sent").
- Is Miss Cam Courtyard going to become a redirect to Courtyard?
- I'd have less whitespace between segments of the timeline, but that might just be me. At least less of a gap at the top, though.
- Are those fourth-level headers under Mission Logs? Why not third-level?
- You're missing some continuum tags on later missions. Summary/commentary typically goes in a sub-bullet, but if you'd rather not, I'd advise using a hyphen like you did in the timeline.
- Please include publication dates on reference links? *puppy eyes*
Aaaand I think that's it!
~Neshomeh