Subject: Interesting.
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Posted on: 2022-05-25 13:47:37 UTC

(Warning: Spoilers!)

This is a good twist. I like that the Word Worlds collided. But maybe you could’ve shown a bit more of the badfics? I was a tad confused for a bit.

The description “stranger fairy Helena” just seems really awkward to me. Maybe “the stranger, a fairy called Helena” would be better?

I thought that the paragraph where the prose explained what happened could have perhaps shown a little more.

Anyway, I liked, exited to see the next part.

—Ls

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