Subject: re: mission finale (spoilers)
Posted on: 2022-07-26 03:56:03 UTC

Oh man! Love this! I had a suspicion you were going to cross the two missions over, but it was especially smart to pit the god-playing Suvians against each other, since no one else in the stories would have the power to stop them otherwise. I also love that the alternates of the agents got to make an appearance and protect their other selves! And Fáelán should be an interesting character to watch developing; the idea of a "wizard" wanting to live a more normal life, rather than the reverse scenario, is intriguing.

One thing, though (and I should have brought this up earlier, but I didn't think about it until now): if you're going to construct artificial badfics, I don't think it's right to create minis with them, especially when it involves creating a new mini type. Part of the fun of minis is that they're accidental mistakes, so intentionally engineering them feels like cheating to me. I don't think it's a big deal this time, since Twisted Wonderland isn't a very well-known fandom, but in the future, I would personally prefer you don't that again. Sorry!

—doctorlit, open to disagreement from other oldbies re: fake mini creation

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